tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9076033512154958207.post2967682772390725545..comments2023-04-26T17:44:44.750+03:00Comments on Asides-Bsides: ZX page 15: Cat HitlerHelmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00584102280299430293noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9076033512154958207.post-77399046278510297122009-09-23T07:18:59.597+03:002009-09-23T07:18:59.597+03:00Yes I don't intend to stop writing, just didn&...Yes I don't intend to stop writing, just didn't have a lot of time last monday, but I made up for it the next day.<br /><br />Page 21 almost done :)Helmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00584102280299430293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9076033512154958207.post-80578917296126558042009-09-23T03:31:04.489+03:002009-09-23T03:31:04.489+03:00this is a very well developed page and the girl is...this is a very well developed page and the girl is really pretty, so calm and fresh. it looks like you are getting over your girl drawing "problem" (though i never seemed to notice it, now i notice that she is well drawn).<br />i also liked the rendering in the buildings, in comparison to the buildings in the bic city splash page. this is one is more organic, and given under your point of view, the other one was more objective.<br />the "read more" is a must, since you started it out that way. we won't need it when we read the whole thing as a book. till then "read more"pan panhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03062589862656818117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9076033512154958207.post-37885326200278591872009-09-22T20:33:36.774+03:002009-09-22T20:33:36.774+03:00That's a real building. If you saw Athens you&...That's a real building. If you saw Athens you'd think my representation of it much less unreal, I think.<br /><br />Thanks for your kind words and yes, I'm keeping on going. Forever.Helmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00584102280299430293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9076033512154958207.post-81872171683472708722009-09-22T19:22:31.419+03:002009-09-22T19:22:31.419+03:00I haven't had a lot to comment about lately ex...I haven't had a lot to comment about lately except "keep going!" and you've got that in hand, but I will say the last two panels are really cute.<br /><br />Interesting sort-of-nouveau building entrance in the first panel there. Your Athens always feels a bit unreal (that's just a sidenote).Lackeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06148459093097482058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9076033512154958207.post-19529794401092147162009-09-22T19:05:35.672+03:002009-09-22T19:05:35.672+03:00I was in a hurry that day cuz I was working on pag...I was in a hurry that day cuz I was working on page 21 (which I'll finish tonight) so no read more that time. Will return next time.<br /><br />Also I haven't been getting any comments lately so I didn't know if anyone was actually reading the 'read mores'.<br /><br />On point, it wasn't actually forced because I didn't concern myself with the idea that people might not realize Hitler was a cat on page 13... that's just how I felt the dialogue should flow. But I do see your point and perhaps for the print edition I'll edit that bubble out :)<br /><br />Thank you for your ongoing interest.Helmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00584102280299430293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9076033512154958207.post-59477172851059885522009-09-22T06:29:00.465+03:002009-09-22T06:29:00.465+03:00No "read more"? Well, I enjoyed it. If t...No "read more"? Well, I enjoyed it. If there's one criticism I have it's to do with page 13 in relation to this one.<br /><br />The "Yup. Weird cat." line at the end of that page felt slightly too forced to me, as if it was there just to make it crystal clear that Hitler refers to a cat.<br /><br />I think it's something the reader can figure out, especially since it's blatantly obvious that Hitler is a cat here.<br /><br />But that's just my opinion, I'd like to hear if others disagree... if so you can probably disregard it, it's pretty trivial.Sergiohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08431450841461501143noreply@blogger.com